Dialogue for Submarine Sequel

The dialogue moves the story forward as it is the disruption of the sequel. The character Oliver will have to confront being apart from Jordana, now that she is dead. It follows the theme of coming of age as he will have to overcome the fact that she has gone, and move on with his life to become a more independent person with having to rely on her. I feel that the dialogue is believable as it has the typical language that Jordana has used in the first film, for instance, swearing.

To improve I will need to show a clearer relationship between the two characters by saying about past experiences and show their bond through actions.